Unit 17

T.V sequence feedback

Genre: Crime drama

Was the genre clear?

The feedback i got alerted me that its clear there is aspect of crime drama in the sequence.

Is it good/excellent? 

All of the reviewers said the sequence was excellent.

Good post production?

All reviewers said the post production was good.

Which shots (if any) don't work well?

One reviewer said there needed to be more music throughout the sequence as it was too quiet.

One of the other reviewers commented saying they think the scene before the vending machine could be cut out.

How will i act on this feedback?

I am going to re-edit the footage adding in music as the sequence is too quiet and has no effect on an audience and i think adding the right music will add to the emotions of the scene.

The scene originally was supposed to introduce us to Amanda and reveal the love life Mark has, this is not shown clearly in the scene so i will cut the scene out as it is not needed.

Final video for unit 17